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Ill est mort, they told Pop
Pop said “Well, it’s about time.”
“It’s been along time coming. I have been prepared.”
“I know where my brother is now.”
“He dead.”

“But Pop,” the family ask
“Ain’t you sad?”
“Why? It was his time to go. The way our sister look it’ll be her
then me that’s next to go.”

The chaplain came in
To say the last rites
Pop slapped him on the shoulder and said
“Hey, he already dead yeah.”

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