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There is an audio of this that i recorded over a hott beat, if you'd like to listen PM me.



I just wanna walk
maybe talk a bit
and you can interrupt my thoughts
till the darkness hits-
all these novice scripts-
they aint cuttin it now-
so much I cant express
so im shuttin it down-
rough as it sounds-
you bring lesiure quick-
being the main reason
my weed is stripped-
I wont bleed for this-
but I will for you-
see the ink spill-
until the chill is blue-
and I kill the view-
for perception though-
I find it interestin-
conceptions flow-
expressions blow-
through the minds of life-
and some will never find-
what this mind will write-
rhymes excite-
find meanings it true-
but lately I've been seeing-
that this meaning is you-
Ive been dreaming it too-
but vision is blurred-
and lately I been livin-
by the difference of words-
hidden but heard-
Ive been searchin my brain-
insertin through the surface
is the purplest rain-
exertin the pain-
easing the pride-
and when they roll through these holes-
Im not leaving your side-
it's easy- id die-
fore' you roam alone-
and I say this in the zone
with the boldest tone-
cold as bones-
eyes of ice-
perhaps I should remind-
I dont lie to mics-
lies are hyped-
see the truth is real-
and this is all I got
as my proof to feel-
in the booth im sealed-
away from it all-
all my other secrets
I say and pray to the wall-


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The following comments are for "A walk through the dark"
by Essence

A walk through the dark
very well written I truely enjoyed it keep it up

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: July 29, 2006 )





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