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If often my thoughts shall wonder
I know I am thinking of you
Sometimes you are out of the mind
and sometime you are remembered.

Whenever I see you walk
I think I should stop ...
... and hold your time and wait.
And then begin to talk!

But then there is "the world"
engulfed in mundane rituals
Rich minutes wasted by the second
Mostly twisted and confused and twirled!

So I decide to stop the time
And let an impediment settle down.
It seems to work so far, so long
Finally everything appears to be fine!

Words we speak are heard
and I dwell in our conversation.
cherish the tales we tell each other
Talking eternities in a single word!

Becoming what we want
I think I am not so lost.
And when this works out so right
I know that the boundries are gone.

Small events can become specs
of dark thoughts and lovely moods
May be love is the song that sings like a bird
Perched on the tree of the dreamy woods!



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The following comments are for "Song of Times"
by ankur440

beautiful poet
This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. I'm sure I've fallen in love with author who must be the sexiest man ever.

( Posted by: queencheeba [Member] On: November 29, 2002 )





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