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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

What is euphoria? Sometimes I have suspicion. Many people has different definition toward it, from solid to changeable one,
You cannot elate one by snub him, it may spite others, as well as push the people around you into panic, do not fall into such a slough, such a way to make one happy is nonexistent now, but unfortunately, quarters of population do it in innocence.
The best way to rouse one¡¦s good mood is not only relinquish all the ways above, but also do it on a gracious way, you can take them wandering on meadow, seeing unknown animals grazing their food, or kangaroo hustling from here to there. I advised one of my friends to do it, serene as he used to be, when he step on wild place, the pouch of his eyes roused, stem of his pipe fell from her mouth, footstep rustling, in a fervent heart to appreciate the world.

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