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Youíve sparked the flame
and reminded me
that Iím all woman.
Itís that look that found me,
the one that said
I have to have you.
You searched my grounds and
discovered the missing pieces.
Again the fires burn
and desires swell.
Deep within the craving has begun,
quench it baby.
Call me Chula while
you embark on that journey
that sends me chills.
I need it,
need you and all you offer.
Donít hold back.
This energy youíve
returned to me
seeks you.


------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Call Me Chula"
by nae411

mi muneca chula caliente
You are one hot chula momma honey! Your poem makes the chula in me want to go out tonight and partee!

( Posted by: castanedalupe [Member] On: July 25, 2006 )

Chula
Eric, there is nothing wrong with Nae, well when I am in the mood for it that is.

Castanedalupe, if you partee you need new shoes. Want to go shopping? Thanks for stopping by.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 25, 2006 )

Chula..Nae?
Even I am some what surprised by this Chula. Anyways, nice write. Keep bring more.

Take care.

GSVK

( Posted by: g.s.vasukumar [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Even you ? GSVK
Your comment made me laugh. Please do tell why even you were suprised?

Wink...
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Much respected
Much respected verry hawnorrubble Moddam.Thees ees more kamasootra than ozzer kamasootra naansense.Een mai village mai veemen do all cooking of foods on verry hawt Chula . Verry goood for chuppattis and curries. Wife veemen not get beeten if Chula verry hawt and foods ver' taystee. Much Salaams , Pranaams and Namastes .

( Posted by: Gorakekalloo [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

I Googled Chula
Cool or Cute and you are both...Nae...but it must have another meaning as your poem is somewhat steamy...I have to turn my a/c on...loving it...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

To be Chula
Gorakekallo, Your comment cracked me up. Glad the wives don't get beaten if they are chula, LOL. Thanks for stopping by!

Kacee, you googled it? LMAO
You are too cute woman. In my own words you are chula. Chula is a term of endearment. I think it is used mostly by Puerto Ricans and Cubans. I does mean sweet, cute but it can also be slang for like hot, not tempature hot,lol. For example we call a pimp, or a man with that "it" factor a "Papi chulo". Kind of gets lost in translation. So happy you enjoyed. And woman please turn that a/c up it is hot out there and in here too.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Chula mi gusta
"I need it, need you and all you offer. Donít hold back. This energy youíve returned to me seeks you."

I found these lines to be completely and utterly perfect. What a rawly sensuous and gorgeous poem!

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Chula Chinadoll
I am so glad you liked it and felt the sensous touch that I hoped would be in there. I was so happy to write something that actually made me smile in that... well you know what kind of way.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Chula
It's hard not to feel the sensuality tightening the seams of this poem. Thank you for posting - nothing like a little sexy to get a person through the work day. ;) Heavens know we lack it in this office!

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

wild woman
i liked this one a lot. it does seem like you went off the deep end, but who wants to be shallow when it comes to sex? raw and primal, what's there not to like? i was giving that look to my modem just now. now i want to be raped by amazon women. good job, keep it up.

( Posted by: BAAL [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Wild is a good word
Baal,
You are so funny. Amazon women? I was trying to think if I know any off hand and none came to mind. Sorry about that. Thank you for the encouragement, I think it helped.

Nae

Chinadoll, Hmm, working in a stuffy office doesn't fit you. Glad you have us to make it more lively.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Stuffy Office
Nae,

I'm about as suited to this job as a fish is suited for a bicycle.

However, unless this ominous Sisterhood of the Feline Whip is hiring abroad, I don't have much choice on my tiny, beloved little island.

Thanks for noticing, though. ;)

-Meghan

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: July 26, 2006 )

Just kidding..
Ok, that name appeared nice.But I think Nae is nice too. Anyway, what is there in name, buddy? U are known for what u are, right?

Take care..

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: July 27, 2006 )

Feline's and more
Thank you ladies. I think I like that name "hot bitch writer" LOL. Thank you. Keepin it real.

Chinadoll, we are definately going to need to work on your work, LOL. Thank you.

GSVK, Yep we are known for what we are. Hmm, that could be dangerous!

Hugs,
Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 27, 2006 )

Lucie
Hey my friend! Thank you for stopping by and reading. You know your comments always make me fly. I am so happy something somewhat sizzling came out!

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 30, 2006 )





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