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i dedicate this to everybody and anybody who has shed a tear because they felt deprived of their rights.

Little community of bias insiders,
Little community of ignorant priests.

Looking too hard to please an enemy,
Looking so closely at a premeditated feast.

Ripping your heart out with raw claws,
Ripping out meaning from my clenching hands.

Misunderstood the motivation behind my writing,
Misunderstood in your time and land.

/Hamlet\'s WiDow/ =p


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by Maya

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