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In my highschool, there are too many people
So many girls, in this clique and that
See her over there? You like? I can be her
Or what about that girl under the tree? I can be her
What about the one laughing with a bunch of boys?
I could be her too. Is that what you would like?
No? Sorry, I am me and always will be
If that's not good enough, you can just go away

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Mad monkey fling poo!


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The following comments are for "New 2"
by SingChi

yeah.....
It's just a secondary reflex that came form my dad never shutting up about "be positive/stay postive/think positve, negative only equals the bad things in life".

Usually I am all for the idea I am expressing in this poem, but I'm just in such a funk that I'd rather pretend to be 'the girl under the tree' or the 'the girl laughing with all the boys' to get myself to be okay. But that would not work, becuase the lines have already been drawn in double permanent sharpie. I have no chance whatsoever (maybe a good thing), and probably no one will ever see 'the girl who is herself' and take a chance.
And no girl should want to be me, I'm a cynical, hyper-sensitive, 'co-dependant', perverted (word that rhymes with witch). I don't think there is anyone(not including bestfriends) who could handle me and actually want to stick around for the storms.

I didn't mean to post this poem, I hit the X-button in the window before the "thankyou for your submission" page came up. I hoped it didn't send, but it did. Oh well.

( Posted by: SingChi [Member] On: July 23, 2006 )





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