Shy
by Thea (Member) - published: July 21, 2006
Word Count: 54 Word Bytes: 369 Viewed: 234 times
Category - Poetry
© Copyright by Thea

0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

He is warming up to me,
Getting his nose out of his shell,
And his mouth, cautiously:
What if the nice rosy smell
Is just a trap?

He’s getting more confident
Seeing I’m willing to stay
Out there,
Waiting,
My soul naked
All in the open
For him
To give it a try.

Related Items

A shell

The Cut

Hope

Thunder

DAYDREAM

RICOCHET

Rainbows

DRAINED

More by Thea »

Comments

The following comments are for "Shy"
by Thea

fabulous
Excellent portrayel of fear and paranoia in this poem. You def. do a great job expressing your fear of vulnerabilty and it works quite nicely.

He’s getting more confident
Seeing I’m willing to stay
Out there

great lines. Excellent job

( Posted by: Essence [Member] On: July 23, 2006 )

..
Nice

( Posted by: Bran [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )

shy
i have to agree with fabulous. very well done.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )

Bite
Which reminds me I once got bit by a tortoise.

Now that’s what I call……… slow to understand

Eric xxx

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Login:
Password:

Related Sites:

Facebook Proxy
*Power Rangers
*Retro Football Shirts
*Joomla Ajax
*MySpace Proxy