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Ever wonder who you are?
Lost, confused, struggling,
Identity seems meaningless,
purpose ironically purposeless.

Friends come, friends go,
mostly go.
Feelings ebb, positive, then negative,
and back again.

No way out, but should there be?
It shouldn't be this way.
No one should feel like they are trying to escape,
or worse, just survive.

Thrive, not survive, Thrive...

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The following comments are for "Thrive"
by Harkonis

I especially liked this piece out of all of your pieces this is the best in so far. Although I have to say that I disagree with the philosophies that you seem to repeat, overall your poetry is very good. Your thrid stanza in the You piece does need some work and I definitely think that you could expand on several of your pieces. Please keep the good writing up. I'd love to see more pieces by you.


( Posted by: Kine [Member] On: November 10, 2002 )

to Harkonis
Love this theme, and the philosophy too actually.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: December 2, 2002 )

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