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In this fathomed night
What is on your mind, my mind
That we can't see stars?

The conscious shape reality.

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The following comments are for "Tell Me Something"
by Furius

This night...
Why are there no comments on this? It is a simple question, yes, but it prodded my mind to wonder. This made me stop...and think, so for that, I find it a success.

( Posted by: JM HELUK [Member] On: December 16, 2002 )

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