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This piece has some mild language and heavy use of stupid acronyms and bad grammar. This piece is also a piece of fiction based on something that really happened(in case my girlfriend, her boyfriend or her friend see this) SORRY

I sit down at the computer desk and 5 seconds later, I have a message. WTF

QuitaGURL



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>>oh really?

QuitaGURL



<< hell yea! He didnít tell u.


What the fuck? Crystal has been whining about how heís been treating her since day one and Rob has been constantly crying about how sheís always lying. I have been stuck in the middle, being his friend and so much more to her behind his back of course because he cried when we shared her if I can say that without it seeming like she is property, but she is definitely my prize.

They broke up a few days ago and now theyíre together again. Why the hell hasnít either one of them said a word? I canít help but ask myself, but then I know exactly why it was why Rob didnít know about us from jumpstart because sheís keeping secrets. How dumb am I really?

>>they both tryna play me. he actin funny rite this sec. i swear she tryna play me.

I feel hurt we just got off the phone she had plenty of chances to tell me about her getting back with him. Any other time the topic is him or them, but never us, which hurts so damn much. I try as hard as I can to treat her good, to make her feel as beautiful as she really is and he calls her a 6 out of 10 and a liar among other things. She goes crawling back like thereís no tomorrow when she just told me today, ďI got you I donít need anyone else.Ē

QuitaGURL



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>>he really isnít sayin shit. Y aren't u talking 2 him. U mad or somethin?
& yea ya girl is tryna play me like a fool

QuitaGURL



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Oh, yes! & Quita has liked Rob from since whenever and he hasnít given her the time of day except for once when he mistakenly called her a dime cause LORD knows she is quite far from a perfect ten or even a polite eight. Iím not trying to hear her whining because she never had a chance not for one sec and would never pull Rob over Crystal even if she were long dead. She just has to always shine the spotlight on herself and thatís really not rubbing me the right way. So I try to act like I care pay my condolences and move the hell on off this beautiful subject of her rejection and vengeance.

>> Oh yea that is fucked up. but don't be phased by that shit. ur friend didn't say nothin 2 me

QuitaGURL



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>> i'm not sayin nothin else shit. it don't make sense plain & simple shit

Iím so ready to be out of the middle of this shit. Quita has no idea because sheís floating in the innocence of the kiddy pool and nobody is bout to tell her nothing. Too bad too, because a chick like her would eat up so juicy gossip like this Jerry Springer shit that my relationship has become with the two of them. The best thing I can do now after playing band aid once before they broke up, is officially not affiliating myself to the other when talking to one. Say nothing, hear nothing, shit Iím so tired of this because it really isnít helping me and her out any either them constantly fighting and having their own little bitch fits every 3 seconds.

QuitaGURL



<< i guess! just donít talk to her for awhile and see if she talk to u!

>> yea & i still can't get over that shit she tryna play me like that. y? there's no effin reason

QuitaGURL



<< i donít know! wat she be doin?

UGH! Its so fucking aggravating that Quita doesnít know, like she canít tell her their frickin best friends. Iíve told all my friends about her with no hesitation. I just feel so bad because she isnít treating me like she loves me as much as she says and I just wish she would. Itís like sheís ashamed to say that sheís with me.

>>NOTHING. i need 2 speak 2 my girl though. this is just 2 stupid

But there are certain things I can say that Quita will miss every time. MY GIRL, is not a term of friendship, but she is so effin slow she looks right pass this. Just like she looks pass Crystal and I flirting on the phone when weíre on three-way, which weíre always on three-way with someone I can never just talk to her because basically she doesnít want to speak to me.

QuitaGURL



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>>I donít care anymore yíall are just bugging 2 damn much huní I donít care no more

QuitaGURL



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Again everything has to be about her. OMG shut the fuck up is all I wanna say its not about you its about me and her, but I try to stay cool, though Iím getting more upset and feeling more and more unloved by my lover.

>>no yíall are just wildin the fuck out I need 2 stop caring 4real 4real cause that is just stress wasted

QuitaGURL



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ITíS NOT ABOUT YOU BITCH!!!!! I type out of anger viciously, but then delete and take a deep breath, feeling my anger build, Iím trying to stay calm, but where the hell is Crystal while all this is happening.

>> yíall is plural sweetie stop trippin on da real though. u wildin over him or her or whatever. he is just basically stuck on her, and she is tryna win MVP wit all this play time. THAT IS IT!! i don't care u do what u do thats my advice don't worry bout them or him or whoever do what u do

QuitaGURL



<< girl calm down! & i told u i ainít trippin over him! yea u rite on both of those, though I need 2 leave it alone u need 2 do da same.

WOW!! She is uber slow. I just said I donít care, which means Iím pissed change the subject, but she canít leave it alone that he doesnít want her ugly ass. Iím getting pissed.

>> i'm calm because i don't care anymore remember

QuitaGURL



<< WHATEVER! talk About us trippin u the really THE ONLY ONE trippin!

I want to say something so bad, but I know if I do I will lose her for sure because she doesnít need everyone knowing sheís going out with a girl let alone one like me I donít blame her, but WTF sheís supposed to love me forever no matter what. Weíre supposed to be singing from rooftops not whispering in back alleys and it plainly pisses me off that sheís doing this.

>> maybe i am but i got my reasons


QuitaGURL



<< yea u do but damn when u wanna say other people is and we say u is u don;t wanna give no damn reason y u is!

Sheís so fucking nosy. She wants to know so damn bad whatís going on. I donít think she has a suspicion maybe she does because when I told Rob that we were both thating the same girl he flipped out and went searching for the truth in all of her friends. Quita is the only one who came to me about it, though and when she asked, Ďwhy did you lie to Rob and say the two of you were going outí, I answered cause we are, but then took it back and said I lied anyways because I knew Crystal didnít want everyone knowing. Weíre not quite past that stage where no one can know hush hush keep it on the low.

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UR FRIEND got me trippin like she always got me trippin

QuitaGURL



<< ok and when i ask u y u say nothin! u cant tell me that she got u trippin and not tell me y! cause that makes it seem like u just want attention and no Iím not sayin u do Iím just sayin

That you think Iím lying and being a little attention whore like you are, yea thanks Quita. I wouldnít have this aggravation if things were known.

<< its whatever. u can think what u want. i'd tell u in a sec, but once again ur friend has me trippin. u wanna know ask her.

QuitaGURL



<< like i said i know u ainít! so damn stop!!! she ainít picking up her damn phone other wise i would ask her and if i did ask her she would be like WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKIN BOUT!

Wow that dagger hits bulls eye right dead center in my heart and my spirits drop lower because sheís right.

>> yea u rite. & that is UBERLY fucked up.

QuitaGURL



<< well im on the phone wit her now and she donít know what u talkin bout!


I canít help, but laugh when that pops up on the screen.

>> OF COURSE she doesn't. i already knew that. U telling me somethin i knew 4rm get go

QuitaGURL



<< ok whatever then y u tell me to ask her?


Her attitude is pissing me off. Iím already upset because my girlfriend is basically treating me like shit, but Quita is rubbing my face in it, HARD.

>> hell i dunno. not like she gonna be REAL

QuitaGURL



<< y u say she aint goin to be real?


>> CAUSE SHE AIN'T

QuitaGURL



<< she must have said sumthin or did sumthinto u for u to say that!

>> yea u can say that


QuitaGURL



<< THEN WHAT SHE DO FOR U TO SAY THAT?

>> ASK HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


All I want is for her to tell Quita. One it will get this stupid bitch out of my face and two it will show me that she loves me for me and Iím not just a summer fling.

QuitaGURL



<< she said she donít know! and damn i ainít on the phone wit her! so wat the fuck u better calm that shit down for real!

Sheís told her alright. That Iím full of shit and Iím crazy and thatís what Quita is acting like, not even knowing the whole story and sheís hurting my feelings, Crystal too. I canít even defend myself Iím backed up against a wall and canít do anything.

>>its whatever then

QuitaGURL



<< its nothin sweetie. not my fault u trippin off some real stupid shit! and if u got a pro wit her u got one wit me!

Iím trying to stay calm, but I got something I want to say and damn it Iím gonna say it and damn it she gonna fit in her place cause Iím gonna put her there.

>> FIRST OF ALL

U DON'T EVEN KNOW WHATíS WIT US so u can CUT THAT SHIT OUT LIKE NOW

SECOND

U REALLY DON'T KNOW ME LIKE THAT SO U CAN TAKE A STEP BACK

THIRD

THATS ON SOME REAL SHIT DON'T COME AT ME LIL GIRL U DON'T KNOW ME LIKE THAT.

u don't know wat u talkn bout kid OMG

QuitaGURL



<< WTF GIRL BYE! WELL SHE DONíT KNOW WTF U TALKIN BOUT EITHER! SO U ON UR ON THERE! AND I DONíT GIVE A FUCK IF I KNOW U OR NOT U GETTIN ALL HYPE WIT ME FOR NO DAMN REASON AND SHIT CAUSE I TRIED TO HELP U OUT! AND BITCH DONíT CALL ME NO LITTLE KID BITCH IM PROBABLY MORE MATURE THEN UR ASS WIT ALL UR DAMN PROBLEMS U MAKIN UP IN UR DAMN HEAD!

SNAP! I snap when I read this. My fingers canít type fast enough, I canít show my anger with this damn computer, but I think she gets the idea with the finalization of the enter key.

>>2 words plain & simple FUCK YOU.

U DON'T KNOW WHAT U TALKIN BOUT SO GET OUT MY SHIT.

& IF CRYSTAL TELLIN U I'M MAKIN SHIT UP U CAN TELL HER THAT SHE NEED 2 REALLY THINK ABOUT WHAT SHE SAYIN OR MAYBE SHE SHOULD TALK 2 ME SO WE CAN SEE WHATíS REAL AND WHATíS MAKE BELIEVE

& BITCH PLZ I'M NOT TRYNA HEAR NONE OF NONSENSE 4RM U BASICALLY SO U CAN WRITE A BOOK ABOUT IT OR KEEP IT 2 YA DAMN SELF ON DA REAL

WTF BITCH SHE DONíT KNOW WHAT THE FUCK U TALKIN BOUT! AND WHAT IS U SAYIN YALL SHOULD TALK AND SEE WHATíS REAL AND WHATíS NOT! UR ASS TO AFRAID TO CALL HER SO WTF IS U SAYIN BITCH! I AINT IN UR SHIT U PUT ME IN IT AND GET THAT RITE! AND I DONíT GIVE A FUCK IF U WANNA HEAR MY SHIT OR NOT U IS! AND DEAL WIT THAT SHIT BITCH! AND BASICALLY MY ASS U CAN GO FUCK URSELF! U GETTIN ALL HYPE WIT ME CAUSE I TRY TO HELP U! FUCK THAT SHIT!

I feel like throwing the monitor against the wall this bitch got me hyped and I havenít even talked to Crystal and HELL we have some real things to talk about if anything that BITCH Quita said is true. I go in my room and get my phone. I call her, RING RING RING RING RING, ďYouíve reached the voiiiiÖĒ Why isnít she answering? SHE SCARED or something? She should be.

I donít call again I lay down on my bed, try to calm down turn on the tv and the stereo and close my eyes. Thereís a lot of blood rushing through my head right now. I have a fever now and my stomach is doing flips from the stress. My phone rings and I turn everything off so I can hear her.

ďYou called me, baby?Ē she says so sweetly.

ďYea,Ē I say and sit up. Iím not looking forward to this conversation, but I need to say everything I feel or this is just going to be chaos.

I speak my case. She listens. You know when someone knows there wrong by what they say afterwards. Crystal doesnít try to argue she just apologizes over and over then when Iím through she says Iím sorry one more time and asks me to forgive her. I do.

I wake up the next morning tired because I was on the phone all night with her and I check my phone and see she left me a message.

I told Quita about us, so now she knows and I told Rob that weíve been going out behind his back and heís mad.

Finally she being truthful to everyone all at the same time and its unbelievable. I have to talk to Rob though cause heís still my friend and I love him. So I go over his house and heís sitting there with his little brother VInny in the front yard.

ďYou tight?Ē I ask using his stupid New York East Coast slang that nobody understands, but only to make him laugh a little because he thinks I sound funny saying his words with my southern accent though its so minuscule.

ďNot at you sis, at her. Why is she always lying to me?Ē he asks.

Crying once again, but its to easy to stay out of his and in mine this time, ďI donít know. What you doing today, big bro?Ē

ďWe bout to leave so I see you later.Ē

Its hard for guys and girls to be friends already, but us thating the same girl has definitely tested our friendship, but Iím glad that things went down the way they did cause if they hadnít and weíd have given the girlfriend-boyfriend thing a try like initially planned we wouldnít be friends because he cries too damn much and Iíd have broken his heart and not looked back. Good thing at least I didnít get the chance.

Next is making peace with Quita. I ring the bell and she comes out, ďWe cool,?Ē

ďYea, always since you with my best friends. You was right I didnít know what was going down, but its too bad you go with Crystal because since I found out that you was into girls I been wanting to get with you.Ē

OH MY GOSH WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!



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The following comments are for "WTF"
by Deeha

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I dig it.

( Posted by: Bran [Member] On: July 20, 2006 )

WTF deeha
WTF? Because of its purity and authenicity to the grammer used in the original event it is scattered and hard to follow. Yet, how could something like this be told in any other way?
not bad. There are some misspelled non-slang words that need to be checked.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )

grammar
I misspelled grammer after telling you to check your spelling. WTF.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )





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