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Would that I forget who i am,
and break ties with my former self
those binds that keep me.
It's limitless; it's links to the past,
Bound to the present, guarded by the future,
and soon we will all set forth, to know what's there.
Calling on our own selflessness,seeing all that is good,
But knowing not to step too far overboard;
Sad as we are, humans, wondering in mood,
All doomed to know why we end up alone.



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The following comments are for "Untitled 27"
by Bran

untitled27
The truth you speak,
Not for the weak!

( Posted by: jsstarmom [Member] On: July 23, 2006 )





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