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Please dont love me like you think I want to be loved.
Love me like you do.

Share with me your heart of hearts, unabashedly, unashamed, and fearlessly. Be free to be human, be vulnerable and approachable. Accept that I can give you an infinate amount of love back should you accept it.

My growing pains may daunt my path occasionally, and cause me to look back and ponder my steps, but never do I ponder or regret the love Ive shared and given along this wonderful journey.

Life wasnt made to be easy, or even palletable sometimes, but one thing is certain, that love is one of the best parts of being alive. To feel that emotion IS to live. And I can only love you like I do.

So please, dont love me like you think I want to be loved.
Love me like you do.

Sinnie 2005 april

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The following comments are for "Fearless"
by SinamonAngel

Needs work
Looks and reads like prose. Its hard to call this poetry due to the lack if not any sign of imagery of figurative language. No line breaks either. The subject matter is strong but the way you've conveyed it is cliche and uninspired.

( Posted by: Sparx [Member] On: July 19, 2006 )

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