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In my dreams
I see you there;
Your smiling crimson lips...
your sultry red hair.

In my dreams
I feel you near;
Your soft, warm skin...
your ticklish, petite' ear.

In my dreams
I stroke your back;
I dig in my nails...
then lightly retract.

In my dreams
Our love is true;
I know you love me...
and I love you, too.

As I wake
I see I am alone;
I miss you, baby...
I yearn to come home.

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"The path to enlightenment is paved in suffering....


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The following comments are for " A Soldier's Dream"
by Terayne

A Soldier's Dream
Reminds me of when my love was in Nam...FLASHBACK...by the way he did come home married to someone else...but then so was I...Thanks for the dream...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 12, 2006 )





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