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Luxury is a man's velvet touch - that lingers long after he is gone .
Masculine is soft and rough all at once,
Love is the wisdom of womanhood
Satisfying and vigorous - Balanced yet mad.


The insanity is our lust for hypocrisy We fall in love with a game
--- 'catch me if you can': to chase and to escape.
We call for love and truth -
Yet when we are given them
We walk away
With a mocking smirk that
Speaks to his eyes,
I say: 'I've already had You! Next !! "


He invaded my thoughts
Wet and pure like a new born child
He invaded my walls
His tongue picks and chooses
Out of the endless geography
Of my body-
Strings of Pearls roll down hills,
Struggling to capture the
lust in his eyes,
recording the suppressed scream
taped to the back of my throat

He leaves, I stay, yet another Victorious fight

/Hamlet\'s WiDow/ =p


The following comments are for "Luxurious insanity"
by Maya

Nice and hot Maya.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: July 24, 2006 )

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