The following comments are for "The Girl Who Couldn't Make Up Her Mind" by Kambriel
I like this lots. Very simple yet nice. I don't know what it is about this one, but I think it is great.
Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: November 6, 2002
this is interesting...short and somewhat very dark. Sounds like some sort of prelude, someone has a less than honorable intention? The imagination really roams aftterwards.
Posted by: Furius [Member] On: November 24, 2002
Thanks...I was taking the idea of some famous poet, I forget his name, but he writes a poem that looksl ike a note he left on the kitchen counter for his wife...Something about, "sweetie, sorry I ate all the plums, they looked so delicious and so sweet," or something along those lines. Anyone know who did that one?
Posted by: Kambriel [Member] On: January 7, 2003
I have to admit, I like how I made the title really long and the poem really short. Not that I did that on purpose or anything. ^_~
Posted by: kambriel [Member] On: January 7, 2003
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