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last night i was cold
i had no one to hold
and though i had my covers
my heart still froze

last night i was alone
no one was home
and though i had my phone
my heart still froze

last night i was afraid
and though i had it made
i'd feel better if you'd stayed
my heart still froze


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M.P.



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by abitoutofmymind

Thanks for putting into words....
.... what it feels like when I go to bed every night!

( Posted by: Majnuna [Member] On: July 5, 2006 )





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