Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Do you want to try something new? It's called PARALLELISMUS MEMBRORUM it is of Hebrew origin. It has lines of parallel construction and presents antitheses and complementary extensions. The lines are usually short and contain three or for words...Here is my try at it... Ghost The silent mist screams my name. Tortured, miserable, soul is now at peace. It's freezing breath heats my longing heart. Go to the light fade into the darkness. I'm sure there are those on lit that can do much better...It's good to exercise your writing skills...have a go at it...Kacee ------ Kacee Huggs

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