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Upon barren ground is wept;
tears, the heaven's flood
while earth is unkept
by titans of lore
who bath in blood
of heartly pore.

Upon these lands I fare;
floods, the heaven tears
erode the silent air
of cruel intent
breaking into frontiers
of heavensent.

Upon these waters I wade;
tears, the heaven floods
conquer all shade
of dark and light
which sits in the buds
of twilight night.

Upon my chest you lay;
floods, the heavens tear
open the light of day
as my titan of lore
comes as passing fare
of passionate roar!

All not saved will be lost.

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The following comments are for "Titan of Lore"
by Siah

Ah, the journey of a poet! I thoroughly enjoyed this one; it is very well-written.

-Aubri, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: June 28, 2006 )

Chapter1, Aubri and LMJ, thanks for reading this piece. I cannot express my true feelings of my voyage as poet, each word is to be tinted by time, but Aubri, you saw some of it!
I've been trying to write some depressive poetry these days yet I can't seem to find the right words. AAARGH!

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 30, 2006 )

I really enjoyed the poem also, good imagery. 'twas an interesting read (though I'd have said bathe instead of bath) : )


( Posted by: Thea Veol [Member] On: June 30, 2006 )

True, bathe does sound better. Thanks!

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: July 1, 2006 )

The antithesis of depression...
If you cannot find the words for depressive poetry, you must be a very happy person! I seem to be the same way: I can't seem to get the sad emotion into my poetry; usually it comes out as a warning against something truly dangerous. I have a poem like that that I will publish as soon as I am through publishing my serial mini-autobiography (it spans just the last three months) "Friendship is Like Outback Steakhouse".

-Aubri, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: July 3, 2006 )

Ponder What You Squander
we live on the verge of Heaven...
why squander paradise...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 29, 2016 )

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