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The wind of truth has brushed against my cheek
Whispering the painful truth into my ears.
The wind of truth has brushed against my cheek
Stirring the fire in my soul
And telling me you have been unkind.

I said it was the wind that carried you away from me
But it was the wind that brought to me the truth.
I looked to the sky and read your words
And thought your speech was strange.
Oh my dear, what chance do I have against your lies?
You are my love but it is impossible for me.

The wind of truth has brushed against my cheek
Whispering the awful truth into my ears.
The wind of truth has brushed against my cheek
Stirring the fire in my heart
And telling me you have been untrue.
Oh my dear, what chance do I have against the truth?
You are my love but it is impossible for me.

Ahh, ahh why?



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The following comments are for "Wind of Truth"
by Majnuna

the wind who brushed your cheek
Why?

Maybe because I am not the wind of truth
Against y cheek I brushed-it'sTRUE!because i flew!
Just me: I am simply the wind -it's TRUE!
Neather your pain or fire of the soul,
Universally known:... the pain it's TRUE!
Never burning for nothing the choosen soul
A giffted pain in reaching the TRUTH about SOUL.


( Posted by: laur [Member] On: July 7, 2006 )

ultimate
The ultimate compliment.... to arouse a response in prose!

Thank you

( Posted by: Majnuna [Member] On: July 10, 2006 )





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