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you need to come down to my level
so we can revel in our demise
whispered words and tainted sighs
murmering i love you
when it was all for nothing
but that nothing
was all i lived for
the sureness of disapointment
is magnified by your insincerity
theres clarity now
and its screaming out loud
because im proud enough to stay away
when i still pray
on hands and knees
for better days
where feelings wont sting
and therell be an ease on my conscience
because for now its still monstrous
and my pain wont cease
surrounded by black dogs
who gorge on the things i have the least of
like you always did
things i hid
would be opened up
and twisted into shards to wound
its all so soon
and im still bleeding
and ashamed of falling for someone
who was so misleading
am i so bad at heeding advice
and following it through
to find someone nice
instead of waiting for scraps
like an orphan for rice
they say if someone fools u once
they are to blame
but if it happens again
its you in the frame
so i was in the wrong
again and again
for taking you back
when you promised to change
but nothing ever did
it was always the same.
i dont want to remember
i want to forget your name
refer to you as so and so
the fool who has stained
and left a big mark on the way i perceive
and am wary of people
who may want to hurt me
like you did
so consistently
my head and my heart
were bruised and battered
then shattered apart
its too early to stop pain
and too late to start
something new
with someone new
who may be false
who may be true
who may be great
or just like you
just like you
it just wont do.

I am a misunderstood genius.

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The following comments are for "Just won't do."
by damaged

You just did
Great!! Nice flow.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: July 6, 2006 )

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