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Into this world
alone i come
to you alone;
alone now i leave.
Alone i work and
alone i will toil;
put the plow
to the mind's
naked soil.
Alone now
will i proceed,
alone now
will i suceed;
when i rejoice
all you can do
is beg and plead
to share with me.
Alone now does
my soul bleed;
so much more
does my soul
need.
i feed
upon a poison
which loathingly
i do imbibe, for
noting else appears
to satisfy...

So dying now
alone i leave;
only momentary
my repreive; but
alone now my life
i must weave,
and my own death
i must grieve.

------
"You have lied to me, my dear Morpheous, and I have ended our little game; I wonder if I fear the truth more than your lies?"
-TRA


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The following comments are for "Alone"
by The Recycled Avatar

lonliness
man..i don't know. writing poems about being "alone" is played out in my opinion. but hey...who am i?
also...dying is a really easy way to end poems and stories. maybe you could think of something a little less clichE...more original. how many poems are there about being alone? probably 438438 million...

( Posted by: llapingach0 [Member] On: October 14, 2002 )

Alone
The Recycled Avatar,

I liked how your poem was not only about being alone, but also goes through a whole lifetime. I liked it and must agree with Jesicanm, the flow is wonderful.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: October 14, 2002 )





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