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sedated by a light at the end of a monorail parrots and pincushions live their way right into a logical fallacy.

gentlemen, let me hang you up by your neckties
and introduce you to an imaginary cause and effect.
hand me the chisel, i've got someone to thank
and the devil’s got mother nature by the throat
but we’ve got a tent pitched.

your nose has grown to ridiculous lengths.
but isn't the best man the one who comes out shaking the hardest?

disposable narcissism played where it’s nice and warm.
hold your questions till we rob the grave.

see the truth?
shield your eyes.
looks can kill.
run and hide.
eat the rainbow,
sit and stay,
and maybe you’ll be a real boy someday.

empty page camouflage.
take a card, you’re next.
your neck's next
to paint your neighbor's neck.

and we’re the one true plague,
spreading like your legs
as we push the wheel deeper,
pull the cord tighter.

you know that smile was always so youthful.
happy is he who lives in fear.
you know your smile was never so useful.

hold your questions.

What is the truth? Ask the majority.

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