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I just love the view up here,
I can watch the soldiers sneer,
gambling with My clothes and leer,
while others have a look of fear,
(My followers that have come here).
Look at all the kids below,
playing, running to and fro,
they donít even really know
why it is I have to go.
See the old woman there?
The one with the graying hair,
you can see her look of care,
a tear runs down her cheek and then
I say ďItís over.Ē And,
"Amen."


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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke


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The following comments are for "The View up Here"
by Psycho6058

Ed..
is right. where are you? peering from sounds like an army scene.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )





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