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For summer, the house I rented was slightly out of reach,
but from the house I could watch the ladies on the beach.
I sat on the sun deck with my binoculars in hand,
watching all the lovely ladies working on their tan.

There was one petite brunette that really caught my eye,
I knew that I could meet her if Id just give it a try.
Id sit there sipping soda, and Id watch her every day,
sometimes wed make eye contact; shed shyly look away.

That summer went so quickly, and now I had to go,
I wondered if shed like me, I guess Ill never know.
Then, while cleaning my deck, from the corner of my eye,
I see my summer fantasy coming over to say hi.

She said she watched me for 3 months and wished that we would meet,
but she couldnt get the courage up to walk across the street.
I said I felt the same way, but I was also shy,
and, talking to her now, I really dont know why.

We talked for several hours, and much to my delight,
she agreed to let me take her out to eat tonight.
The summer was quite lonely but it didnt turn out bad,
in fact, it turned out being the best summer I had.

All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke

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The following comments are for "Summer Rental"
by Psycho6058

I could see as I read the whole episode between you and her it was so cute! I like this poem its soft and real and I could actually see it all happening. pIts good to be able to write your readers into your work, so what else happend? LOL!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

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