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a boy takes his test
and writes with no tool
and thinks with no brain
and they sit in their little corners
dreaming of romeo
and juliet
and the boy with no tools
takes the ancient torch
carried by our fathers
and their fore fathers
and one by one
lights they who think of
fairy tales and thought ablaze
and the boy took the torch
and put it out in the darkness

------
i am a misuderstood lunatic


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The following comments are for "erase me"
by schindees

I don't understand
I don't see the connection between title and body of the text. Is there a connection I lost somewhere? I actually felt it as an uplifting poem, with the boy without tools put the fire into darkness and illuminated it.
Would you explain for me?

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

you lost a few things
the tourch represents knowledge the bou represents the future the boy burns the ones who think and then puts the tourch of knowledge out forever

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

Schindees
Oh okay, well yeah, i must have lost that meaning along the way. Sorry.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

siah
dont worry atleast you tryed to figure ti out thanks

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: June 28, 2006 )





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