The following comments are for "i dont belive" by schindees
Religion will do that you... but it takes more than just saying something is a fairytale to get a Christian to think a bit more logically.
I've always felt the same way about religion... it's just a made-up story about an omniscient being who created all knowledge and things, without knowing how to create knowledge beforehand. Knowledge without effort.
As for the poem... it's a bit too short. It's more of a snippet than a full work. It didn't really address the central topic very much (I'm assuming this is a nonbeliever's response to religion?). You've got a good start, though; just try expanding a bit and working on the spelling errors.
three very diffrent views
i didnt plan relgion as an under tone but under standing needs schema it was meant to be very short very staight to the point kinda poemg g.v.s.k. commeted Lachrym thought of religion i am a conservative jew by the way and siah built on the whole thing
the poem is a protest about popular media the man represents the past and the booy reresents the futuer
Posted by: schindees [Member] On: June 26, 2006
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