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at the train station
they wait holding tickets
they wait for days
for months
for years
and as if a spell had been broken
the couple stepped into the throng
and on to the tracks
of a approaching train
and the the train will rush
through the terminal
and two blank tickets
will drift through the air
that follows the train
that stops at nowhere

i am a misuderstood lunatic

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The following comments are for "the times"
by schindees

Where do the times go!

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

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