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Unto conformity we surrender
Into depression we fall

From love we shy
To money we run

Then the truth we knew
Now living the lie

Near Death we become
Far from life we are

Birth of Society
Death of the Individual

Found in Truth
Lost in deception


More than seems, less than known...

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The following comments are for "Conformity"
by MagnusVonMythos

Hey Magnus,
I like this. To conform to another's standards adds to and subtracts from who we are.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: July 11, 2006 )

I've always been a fan of minimalist poetry. Well done. Interesting name you've chosen as an avatar. Where did you come up with that?

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: July 12, 2006 )

My Avitar Name
My name is merely my real name, yes my legal real name. I am glad you like it ...

( Posted by: magnusvonmythos [Member] On: July 18, 2006 )

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