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sniper takes the wheel
and drives endemic lines.
surgeon melts the plastic
from a nauseous valentine.

sniper scans the surface
for simple scams to sell.
surgeon sews the bullet holes
into the wishing well.

sniper heaves the voices,
but never what they mean.
surgeon poses for the camera,
bent in neural wings.

sniper stabs a phrase
into his favorite shark,
so surgeon leaves the party tree
and scratches at the bark.

What is the truth? Ask the majority.

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The following comments are for "Blinker / Thinker"
by Lachrym

I just found this catchy gem.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: June 22, 2006 )

blinker / thinker
A-Not bad.

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: June 22, 2006 )

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