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1 to start it all
and brings them all in
2 to be the catalyst
sparking interest within the mind
3 to be the centre
firm,strong and set in stone
4 was the anomoly
the adventure into the unknown
5 was a ghost- always there
but rarely truely shown

Something connecting
within oue essence
brought closer than family
water is thicker than blood
shared secrets and fears
and mindfucks galore
the journey began
time to explore some more

What will this be
a journey for all?
or a journey for one
felt by all?

New energies entering
into a circle of enchantment
minds untouched
unfelt by love
a death of old ways
time to build anew

an energy
for all
to one day enjoy
spread the word
live the joy!!!

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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The following comments are for "When Words Become Reality"
by twistymisty

good one...
the death of old ways... I like this line its hopeful when you think of the past to be able to look towards the future in the newness of what could be.

water is thicker then blood? mm mm.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

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