sniffing wind as it floats by
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can't quite figure out the smell
familiar pungent odor
The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables made of of four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.
For all who like a challenge...and love to try different forms of poetry...add some of your own folk songs with a Japanese twist...Kacee