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i hope you all like this one! comment if you read please!!!

as i sit down and think,
of what to write,
i think of all,
the beautiful things in site.

As i look to the sky,
the sun just going down,
i smell the rain,
that has just fallen down.

I look through the feild,
on this 14 acre lot,
and see the deer just creeping out,
for there moonlight walk.

The birds, still chirping,
the air still warm,
the moon just shining,
as i feel warm inside.

I thank God for the purity,
the beauty, and grace,
he has certianly blessed us,
on this hot summer day.

As i lay down for bed,
on this beautiful night,
i pray to God,
for everything in site.


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