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Happy Father’s day to the dead beat weed head sittin in his cell
Damn Daddy I can’t wait til you get outta jail
You owe me money so you better get a job quick
Cause nothing will make me forgive you for leavin me with this son of a bitch
Your son don’t even remember what you look like
& I can’t forget that stupid face you gave me when you told me you pawned my bike.
Do you remember when you smoked that whole pound and took us on a drive
How you almost crashed and we almost died?
The funny thing is momma told me how you begged her to give you a baby
How come now you act like you don’t want me?



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The following comments are for "Father's Day"
by Deeha

Angry
I must say that even venom seems nicer than the rage instilled upon the father figure in this piece. Great Rant.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 19, 2006 )

Unimaginable...
I may be one of those people with good parents who are still married, but I can see how awful it must be to be missing a real father figure in your life. But maybe you have a grandfather or a friend's dad who you can respect and look up to. When you don't have something as important as a dad, you have to find a way to improvise.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: June 23, 2006 )

My Dad
I HAVE A REAL FATHER FIGURE, MY DAD (my step-dad). THIS PEOM REALLY DOESN'T SHOW THAT SIDE OF THE STORY THOUGH.

( Posted by: Deeha [Member] On: June 24, 2006 )





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