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Chapter 1



The following comments are for "Forbidden Us"
by nikagurl5889

Almost couldn't handle this one!
Short, sweet, direct in "hiding behind the bushes" kind of feel. Funny as hell!

The beginning of the Forbidden that there is no us!

Yea...I'm simple minded. Shit happens.

I saw your screen name and I'm often intrigued by what the meaning behind the name is. So I looked you up here to read some of your works...and there it is! Two years old none-the-less!

I'm easily I said simple!

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: August 28, 2008 )

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