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Satan's Spawn

Swimming in black tendrils, feeling annoyed

he munched on a salad of lettuce, cheese and prawn

each leaf is destroyed!

"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde

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by MountainBill

Then came dessert and it turned out alright for monster grouch didn't it? xox

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: June 15, 2006 )

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