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How could you!
How could you let me down
When I needed you most!
I thought you cared..
I thought I could depend on you
Was it all just and act?
Was it all just lies?
It took some time
But I finally realised
You are not a friend!
You keep breaking my heart
disappointing me...
And standing me up again and again
Do you know what your doing to me?
You are tearing me apart
Slowly piece by piece
Did you know that?
Well, it’s to late anyway!
With this I give you my last goodbye
I never want to see you again..
I hate you now…
Oh, I almost forgot
Good f****** bye!

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The following comments are for "With this I give you my last goodbye"
by OdinsDottir

Sometimes it's better to say 'good bye' than continue with pain.


( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: June 19, 2006 )

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