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This is your last chance
I'll never come crawling back to you
never appologise for things
that was'nt even my fault..
I'll never stand on my knees
begging for you to come back
never will I sink that deep again
Never...
This time you'll be the one standing on your knees
asking for me to forgive you
asking for me to take you back...


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The following comments are for "Things will never be the same..."
by OdinsDottir

Intense
I liked it and I completely feel everything your saying. Only one problem, the spelling and grammer. Fix these small blemishes and you will have a hit!

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )

but better...
things will never be the same and you are right
nothing is constant but change.
though they may not be the same you can always strive to make them better.

even alone, especially when you're alone you get to know yourself better your strengths and weaknesses you evn get to work on them.
if they can't see you for who or what you are and appreciate you then they do not deserve you

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 17, 2006 )

Torment, anguish
I see a lot of torment and anguish in your poetry.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: September 10, 2006 )





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