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Stale



De-evolution
arrived long ago
when the wealthy
found a way
to fully break the minds
of modern children

Pollute the culture
and reduce the youth
to mindless animals

These kids
are like stale water
An endless sea
of stagnance
decay
filth
dehumanized
dehumanizing
taking the poison
in the fullest
possible dose
and becoming
absolutely motionless

These are not
the still waters
of peace and placidity
but the tepid
deadening chill
of cold, grey
clamminess

a vast puddle
of acid rainwater
and lifeless bilge
floating atop
cold water
unmoved
by any wind
but that of
pestilence


------
The Alienist
jhfurnish@yahoo.com


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