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--Peering in blank windows--

Blank windows
no shadow of soul
even animals
have something
no matter how small.
But here looking at you
shivers
something's wrong
no one's home
doesn’t matter
if it's small
all have one.
Where's yours?





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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The following comments are for "Peering in blank windows"
by bhagwandave

bhagwandave-best work
This is wonderful. What a great topic, nicely expressed.

I have been reading your work for over a year now, and I like this one best.

Regards,
Lady M

( Posted by: LadyMitulia [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )

Blank Windows
Not bad. Could have been more subtle though--The line "no shadow of soul" is a bit blunt in my opinion, thought I loved the title and its metaphore.

Love. Peace. Metallica.

( Posted by: KnightHawk [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )

Dave
Yes ...Eyes are the windows to the soul...some people have dead black stagnant pools...no heart or conscience...This is intense...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )





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