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In the distance I could hear
them sneaking up on me,
I just stoked my fire
and sat there fearlessly.

Time stood still, (and so did I,)
as I read my book,
I could sense them moving closer
just to have a look.

I turned a page, and turned my ears
toward the sounds I heard.
They signaled to each other,
without speaking a word.

Finally they were close enough,
and made a jump for me,
my two sweet grand daughters,
giggling with glee.

I knew that they would capture me,
from the very start,
since the day that they were born,
they’ve both captured my heart.


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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke


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The following comments are for "The Sneak Attack"
by Psycho6058

Psycho
You are such a softy....this one is so mushy and gushy, probably won't win any awards but it is a very clever twist -- thought you had taken a book on a turkey hunt or something.

bw

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: June 14, 2006 )





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