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How do you save your savior,
the one who changed your life so much?
Black to white,
dark to bright.

How do you help the helper,
who brought you from despair?
Who taught you itís okay to love,
and that life has meaning here.

Hold tight to the holder of your heart,
help your helper form despair.
Save your savior.
For now itís your turn to be the life changer.



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The following comments are for "save the savior"
by grrlynn

hmm...
I feel the sentiment in this, but the last two lines didn't fit with the flow and didn't feel right in the reading.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: June 13, 2006 )





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