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Worries within me I do keep,
As I gently fall asleep.
Will I drink the ocean dry?
Will the stars stay in the sky?
Its silly little things like this,
Which keep me from my slumber bliss.
Maybe I shan’t wake up at all,
And miss my stupid alarm clock call!
“Get up” It says “And get out of bed.”
SHUT UP; SHUT UP, ooh aching head.
I bash it up and go back to sleep,
Within me worries I do keep.

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The following comments are for "For want of sleep"
by Man Eating Maniac

I nice light-hearted look at sleeplessness.
Can't really fault it - everything fits perfectly, and it makes a very good read.
Score 8/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 7, 2003 )

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