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Iím on display,
For everyone to see.
Do I dismay?
Are you disgusted by me?

Do I make you gag?
Every time I appear?
Do I make you cower?
And hide in fear?

Am I really that hideous?
Am I really that scary?
Am I covered in spots?
Is my whole body hairy?

Take a good look,
What do you see?
Tell me right now,
Are you disgusted by me?

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The following comments are for "Are you disgusted by me?"
by Man Eating Maniac

it is a shame
because we do let ourselves be influenced on what others say, if we decide for ourselves, and say "this is what i am and i don't care what you think" then we come across as being what we don't want to be, in some cases anyway.
for all it's worth, thanks, but i don't care what you think...

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: October 23, 2002 )

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