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Seizure pain
Flowing streams
The pace kills
When it stops it feel worse
Let it flow
Adaptability works wonders
Soul to soul we have developed
The phobia fades
Betrayal wins?
Sum up it all and see on whole
The phenomenon is recurring
Like a fairies wheel
Touching ground on every round
It draws holes while it ceases
Ground is real
Seizure that pain

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The following comments are for "CIRCLE"
by Abbas

Of seizures and Pain
This is such a captivating read. The words flow with serene magnanimity and it grinds with soul-fulfilling volume ... quite captivating!

( Posted by: dsoul [Member] On: June 14, 2006 )

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