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Angelís Wings

Why do we want to fly on the wings of a dove?
Why do we want to be like the angels from above?
What do we want to fill in our lives?
How can we think of so many ways to lie?

Why do we want to think of ways to deny?
Why donít we think of ways to comply?
What do you think youíll do with your life?
How can you life through it with all of the strife?

We all want to live with angelís wings?
All we want to do is wear a gold ring.
Al we want in life is gold
We only want and believe in things we can hold.

How will we get angelís wing to fly?
We wonít get them if the only thing that we do is deny.
We want everything thatís in our reach
All weíll do is beseech


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