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May Be love

I think that it may be love.
Thatís twisting me up inside.
Itís making my cheeks all rosy.
Tingles are running all overí
What is happening to me?
I think that it may be love.

When he goes walking past me
I will stop dead in my tracks.
I savor every moment
That I am in his presence
Iím filled with wonderful joy.
I think that it may be love

So here it goes, the fantasy,
The dream Iíve always had.
I will take my chance with him.
Maybe heíll take his chance with me?
So long, farewell, Iím going for the plunge.
I surely know that this is love.


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The following comments are for "May Be Love"
by saphira

Great...Sapira..
I really loved this one. I think it was excellent write ! I fell in love with this one with the starting lines itself..

I think that it may be love.
Thatís twisting me up inside.

Keep posting. Take care.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: June 17, 2006 )





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