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Nothing To You

I gave you all of my love and you turned it all away.
Iím waiting here for you, like itís just another day.
Youíve deceived me and now itís an abuse.
All I really feel is nothing, waiting for my use
What would you do if my decision were to stay?
Why should I try so hard, when youíll only push away?
I may not hate you now with such a deep dark passion.
You are even worse with your kind of thoughtless fashion.
I will never consent to being your wife.
Please take a one-way ticket out of my life.
I may never understand why youíve poisoned our love.
Now I will forevermore fly like a lonesome dove.

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everyone hears what you say...friends listen to what you say....best friends listen to what you don't say...



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The following comments are for "Nothing to you"
by saphira

saphira
I really like your poem. It speaks with such raw emotion. I love it. I'm going through a simmilar situation. It kind of gives me a lonely hope.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: June 12, 2006 )

saphira
I agree with thesadpoet, this is a good piece. Me myself am also going true a similar thing.

'I gave you all of my love and you turned it all away.
Iím waiting here for you, like itís just another day.
Why should I try so hard, when youíll only push away?'

So true, I feel the same way.

( Posted by: deraj [Member] On: June 12, 2006 )

Nothing To You
"Youíve deceived me and now itís an abuse.
All I really feel is nothing, waiting for my use"

What a digusting feeling.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: June 13, 2006 )





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