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(A satirical acrostic and nonet)


Eve's
Virgin
Origin
Linked to nonsense:
Upwardly mobile
Tuna fish sprouted feet,
Inched ashore, and climbed in trees.
Odd as this fishy story sounds,
No one seems to mind its rotten smell.


------
The Gadfly


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The following comments are for "Evolution"
by TheGadfly

All too true
Thank you, Windchime, for ringing the bell loudly!

( Posted by: TheGadfly [Member] On: June 8, 2006 )





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