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Sore, sunburned, sweethearts
Surrounded by swirling sea
Swimming side by side

Boys browsing the beach
Beautiful bodies bouncing
Beware, big boyfriends

Whitecaps wash ashore
Winds increasing as tides rise
Waves reshape the beach


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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke


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