Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Sore, sunburned, sweethearts Surrounded by swirling sea Swimming side by side Boys browsing the beach Beautiful bodies bouncing Beware, big boyfriends Whitecaps wash ashore Winds increasing as tides rise Waves reshape the beach ------ All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke

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